安仔第三首词曲创作---‘爱在发酵’DEMO版..

‘爱在发酵’DEMO版 by Kenis Zhee Ann

感谢大家耐心的等候, 我的第三首创作终于可以成果验收啦..
这首情歌呢, 也算是我第一次“公开”的挑战啦~~
主要强调的是以一对情侣简单,生活化的方式,
加以白话的词汇和轻松的旋律,
来呈现最简单, 带出一丝丝甜蜜的感觉给大家..
希望这首歌的歌词不会太过于白话,
然后也能带给你们我所能感觉到的感受~
欢迎各位勇于给我指教和留言,不要害羞~ 好就好，不好就不好~~
哈哈~~

还是那句,虽然我没有专业的录音设备
也不会乐器,歌喉也不怎么样~~
当希望大家还是能从我的创作中看见我的努力~ 我的进步~~
我不敢说我的创作未来会怎样怎样,.
但至少可以让我知道, 我选择玩创作是对的好吗??
希望你们会喜欢~~ ^^

歌词(Lyrics)：

爱在发酵 (Ai Zai Fa Jiao)©
Composed by- Kenis Zhee Ann

在你身旁才发现
Zai ni shen pang cai fa xian
原来这条路有你才更美
Yuan lai zhe tiao lu you ni cai geng mei
阳光的笑脸打在身上  晒掉疲惫
Yang guang de xiao lian da zai shen shang   shai diao pi bei
是你才能给我这种感觉
Shi ni cai neng gei wo zhe zhong gan jue
经过你最爱的咖啡店
Jing guo ni zui ai de ka fei dian
你撒娇地说想要喝一杯
Ni sa jiao de shuo xiang yao he yi bei
Latte配果酱面包滋味  好特别
Latte pei guo jiang mian bao zi wei   hao te bie
就像我天生就和你速配
Jiu xiang wo tian sheng jiu he ni su pei

Bridge:
*不管艳阳大白天  还是刮风打雷
Bu guan yan yang da bai tian  hai shi gua feng da lei
我愿意化身成为你的专属屋檐
Wo yuan yi hua shen cheng wei ni de zhuan shu wu yan
如果我不在身边  脚印少了一对
Ru guo wo bu zai shen bian   jiao yin shao le yi dui
别担心  是你走得太远   OH oh~
Bie dan xin   shi ni zou de tai yuan  Oh oh~

Chorus:
**想一直这样陪你  好不好   好不好~Xiang yi zhi zhe yang pei ni   hao bu hao   hao bu hao
让我一直呵护你  当你的  暖暖包~
Rang wo yi zhi he hu ni   dang ni de   nuan nuan bao
偶尔你会对我发脾气  打打闹闹~~
Ou er ni hui dui wo fa pi qi   da da nao nao
但是这对我来说  不重要 a ao
Dan shi zhe dui wo lai shuo   bu zhong yao 
你说你害怕失去   我的好  好烦恼
Ni shuo ni hai pa shi qu   wo de hao   hao fan nao
我比你更加珍惜   我们的  每一秒
Wo bi ni geng jia zhen xi   wo men de   mei yi miao
我爱你这个秘密只想  让你知道
Wo ai ni zhe ge mi mi zhi xiang   rang ni zhi dao
放我们的爱在蓝天发酵..
Fang wo men de ai zai lan tian fa jiao

Repeat: *, **

Final Chorus:
想一直这样陪你  (好不好~)
Xiang yi zhi zhe yang pei ni   (hao bu hao~)
让我一直呵护你  (啦~~)
Rang wo yi zhi he hu ni   (la~~~)
偶尔你会对我发脾气   打打闹闹~~
Ou er ni hui dui wo fa pi qi   da da nao nao
但是这一点都不重要~~~
Dan shi zhe yi dian dou bu zhong yao~~~
你说你害怕失去   (好烦恼~)
Ni shuo ni hai pa shi qu   (hao fan nao~~)
我比你更加珍惜   (每一秒~)
Wo bi ni geng jia zhen xi   (mei yi miao~~)
我爱你这个秘密只想  让你知道
Wo ai ni zhe ge mi mi zhi xiang   rang ni zhi dao
放我们的爱在蓝天发酵..
Fang wo men de ai zai lan tian fa jiao
把这份爱收藏一直   到老~~~
Ba zhe fen ai shou cang yi zhi   dao lao~~~



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当然,想借着这首歌来祝福大家:
有另一半的朋友们,祝福你们永远那么甜蜜,希望我的歌能带给你们同感哦~~ ^^
没有另一半的(包括我自己..xD!), 一起加油,在新的一年里,希望会有新的希望好不好??
O(∩_∩)O
一起加油~~ 新年快乐！！！！^^

最后呢,还是要声明:
尊重原创者的最佳方式就是严禁抄袭他的作品~
谢谢大家的合作~
HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!~ \(^o^)/

By:
~* Kenis Zhee Ann--启安 *~

安仔第二首歌词创作---‘两人尽头’DEMO版.. (UPDATED!!!)

*由于牵涉到音乐的版权问题,所以呢小弟必须删除掉我po在fb的demo..

在此说声抱歉,也谢谢已经留言的朋友们,虽然有些我没看到啦~~哈哈..

不用担心,虽然fb不能放,但是我有部落格嘛..

我决定加放一首..也是同样的一首..

不过差别是在于升降key罢了..哈哈~~

由你们决定哪一个比较好听咯.. 留言哦~~ ^^

*due to sum copyright stuffs, i've removed the demo version dat i posted at fb..

sry for the inconvenience, thx 4 all the comments..

no worries readers, aldou cant view it at fb, i still can display it at my bloggie~~^^

so i've decided to add in another demo, which is the same song la,

is jz the matter of key,minus 1 & minus 2 oni.. LOLzz

so u guys decide which 1 suits more kay~~ thx again~~ ^^

预告了那么久,是时候来个成果验收了吧..

听歌之前,首先先感谢漂亮的zun zen小姐那么看得起我..
给了我一首她的曲子,也是她自创的哦..
叫我帮她写词..
还在她的部落格帮忙预告..
所以相信有一部分的读者都是zen的朋友吧??
谢谢你们的到访,然后欢迎指教,
要留言也可以,注明就可以了..感恩感恩..哈哈~~
到时我也会上载原唱者的版本咯~~ ^^

Oh yea,my second song creation(demo version) finally released…
Title is‘两人尽头’..
The music composed by Wong Zun Zen (credits to her o.. ^^),
n the lyrics composed by me.. =D
Erm, basically is an emo song,
Hope u guys will like it &………
Comment if u wish to…
*defenitely my singing nt as well as singer la~~ ><''

Quote zen:
**P.S.
Its copyrighted! =)
No copy cat plz~~ ^^

version 1: -1key

 

version 2: -2key

  

两人尽头

Lyrics Composed by- Kenis Zhee Ann
Music Composed by- Wong Zun Zen

我沉默  凝望着远处零星的灯火

Wo chen mo  ning wang zhe yuan chu ling xing de deng huo

只有泪陪我 倾听着难过

Zhi you lei pei wo    qing ting zhe nan guo

陪了那么久

Pei le na me jiu

为什么  失眠的夜晚变得好寂寞

Wei shen me   shi mian de ye wan bian de hao ji mo

一个人独坐  在床头  回忆却很重

Yi ge ren du zuo   zai chuang tou   hui yi que hen zhong

**(chorus)

你说过 你的身旁少了一个我

Ni shuo guo   ni de shen pang shao le yi ge wo

可是对不起

Ke shi dui bu qi

我负担不起你给的承诺

Wo fu dan bu qi ni gei de cheng nuo

原谅我 自私的霸占了一人生活

Yuan liang wo   zi si de ba zhan le yi ren sheng huo

错  请怪我 只把你当朋友

Cuo   qing guai wo   zhi ba ni dang peng you

*(bridge)

手  放开双手  若握住的手继续在颤抖

Shou   fang kai shuang shou  ruo wo zhu de shou ji xu zai chan dou

抖得很痛  痛不过强求

Dou de hen tong   tong bu guo qiang qiu

求  茫然追求  是你放不下我编的理由

Qiu   mang ran zhui qiu  shi ni fang bu xia wo bian de li you

犹豫之后   只不过是邂逅*

You yu zhi hou   zhi bu guo shi xie gou*

离开后  尝试着习惯独处的哀愁

Li kai hou  chang shi zhe xi guan du chu de ai chou

微弱的霓虹  无力的闪烁

Wei ruo de ni hong   wu li de shan shuo

孤独的街头

Gu du de jie tou

到最后  残留的是我动心的源头

Dao zui hou   can liu de shi wo dong xin de yuan tou

关上电之后  就封锁  一切让它走

Guan shang dian zhi hou   jiu feng shuo   yi qie rang ta zou

**(chorus 2)

你说过  你的身旁少了一个我

Ni shuo guo   ni de shen pang shao le yi ge wo

可是我无法

Ke shi wo wu fa

成全你曾说的一切永久

Cheng quan ni ceng shuo de yi qie yong jiu

原谅我  狠心地遗弃了你给的梦

Yuan liang wo   hen xin de yi qi le ni gei de meng

恨  请恨我  你从不属于我

Hen   qing hen wo   ni cong bu shu yu wo

***(final chorus)

请你走  带走所有快乐和伤痛

Qing ni zou   dai zou suo you kuai le he shang tong

别再继续

Bie zai ji xu

逗留继续让它侵蚀我伤口

Dou liu ji xu rang ta qin shi wo shang kou

结束梦  清醒之后一切又从头

Jie shu meng   qing xing zhi hou yi qie you cong tou

让爱  永远掩埋  在两人尽头

Rang ai   yong yuan yan mai    zai liang ren jin tou   

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谢谢大家的支持,

如果你们觉得好听或是不错的话,

帮忙宣传下咯..

相信我也会放在fb promote下了..

谢谢了..

同时我也会努力继续创作的..  ^^

thx for spending ur time here,

appreciate so much n thx 4 supporting me..

promote anywhere u like if u tink is good k?? haha~~

lotsa thx again~~ 

stay tuned 4 more song creation in here yea~~ ^^

感恩篇.. O(∩_∩)O~~

嗯,自从本人推出了首个公开创作之后,
受到的反应比我预期中来的好乜..
不知道我在说什么的, 麻烦点击--->  wedding dress chinese version  ^^

再次要感谢各位的支持,
感谢各位的留言,无论是在我的安仔之家还是msn的,
感谢各位给我的建议,
我都有听进去的..哈哈~~
还有特别感谢bibi 和 sue 两个,
帮我在她们的部落格和fb promote我这个创作..
对了,有谁有暗中帮我promote的麻烦给我知道哦..
我会马上补充我的感恩谢词的..哈哈哈！~~
n yea..
thx shermaine again for promoting my creation to her fren~~
^^

我说过,如果这次的反应好的话,
我会继续创作多几首歌给你们看咯,
同时我也会继续努力练唱..
哈哈..

接下来我要做的,就是把我这首小创作,
搬上youtube这个大舞台了..
哇,既期待又怕受伤害..
所以最近小弟在努力练习,
希望能录制到好听点的声音,
你知道的啦,
YouTube的听众会怎样comment你都不知道的咧..
不弄好点会被弹到我满脸口水的噢..
哈哈哈！！

所以安仔之家的读者们,
敬请期待我的youtube处女作咯~~~ ！！
到时再麻烦大家口耳相传下咯~~
放心,到时我又会写多一篇 “感恩篇--趴2” 了.. 哈哈！

 

WEDDING DRESS CHINESE VERSION!! (UPDATED!!!)

*for those who had oledi listened to my voice clip, i've replace a better version of recording than the previous 1.. so can give another comment if u wish..  

While for new reader,YES.. believe in what u see wif ur eyes readers.. me myself composed a chinese version of "WEDDING  DRESS"..  it had been two years time since i composed this new song.. Sincerely, i would like to gather all of ur precious opinions n comments.. is really worth considering for me towards my creation of dis lyrics..

i'll will like to thx to everyone of u and appreciate so much for viewing n giving comments if u do..  i know is kinda low quality of production n of cz i'm not a pro singer as well.. n my voice sucks ><, but still i hope u all enjoy dis song in a new version ba.. ^^

是的没错..你们没有看错.. 小弟我在空暇之余玩玩下创作.. 自己创作了wedding dress的华语版..

一直以来都有涉及创作领域..只是稍微休息了一阵子(两年..), 再重新执笔..

小弟我知道这首歌几乎无人不知,无人不晓..  所以不介意的话..请给小弟一些意见..我都会虚心接受..  说真的..我真的很重视这次的创作.. 希望能够获得大家的评价..  再次预先献上无数的感恩咯..  小弟的低素质录制,加上没有过人的声音,希望不会折磨到你们的双耳, 也希望你们会喜欢~~ ^^

*reminder: maximize ur pc volume n paused my playlist first b4 u listen..  pinyin n english translation of the meaning of this song provided below.. and lastly, copyrighted yea.. no COPY CATS o.. thx~  ^^ 

  

WEDDING DRESS CHINESE VERSION (CHINESE + PIN YIN)

当你离开的时候
Dang ni li kai de shi hou
 
我只能选择沉默
Wo zhi neng xuan zhe chen mo
无助的眼眸望着你的背影
Wu zhu de yan mou wang zhe ni de bei ying
掉头就走..
Diao tou jiu zou
心痛的感觉就像流泪般难过
Xin tong de gan jue jiu xiang liu lei ban nan guo
彼此之间的感情慢慢被距离打破
Bi ci zhi jian de gan qing man man bei ju li da po

我掩饰自己
Wo yan shi zi ji
不让悲伤一看就识破
Bu rang bei shang yi kan jiu shi po
我屏住呼吸
Wo ping zhu hu xi
沉浸在窒息里的生活
Chen jin zai zhi xi li de sheng huo
只是来不及
Zhi shi lai bu ji
他已是你的占有
Ta yi shi ni de zhan you
故事的结局由你们接手..
Gu shi de jie ju you ni men jie shou

**(chorus)
BABY 你忍心就选择和他走
Baby ni ren xin jiu xuan zhe he ta zou
CZ YOU SHOULD BE MY LADY

请看看我,一直在守候.. (在你身后)
Qing kan kan wo,  yi zhi zai shou hou.. (zai ni shen hou)
音乐的前奏是你的结果
Yin yue de qian zou shi ni de jie guo
只留下我一个人承受.. (这难过)
Zhi liu xia wo yi ge ren cheng shou.. (zhe nan guo)
戒指套在你的手中
Jie zhi tao zai ni de shou zhong
幸福的人却不是我..
Xing fu de ren que bu shi wo

*看着你的 WEDDING DRESS
Kan zhe ni de wedding dress
属于你的 WEDDING DRESS
Shu yu ni de wedding dress
披着你的 WEDDING DRESS
Pi zhe ni de wedding dress
喔~ 最美丽的 WEDDING DRESS *
Wo~~ zui mei li de wedding dress..

是我自己太懦弱
Shi wo zi ji tai nuo ruo
不敢挽回你的手
Bu gan wan hui ni de shou
或许是我自己犯下无可原谅的错
Huo xu shi wo zi ji fan xia wu ke yuan liang de cuo
孤独矗立在我内心的每个角落
Gu du chu li zai wo nei xin de mei ge jiao luo
翻覆地重播着你我之间的快乐
Fan fu de chong bo zhe ni wo zhi jian de kuai le

我用力嘶吼
Wo yong li shi hou
受伤的伤口仍在痛
Shou shang de shang kou reng zai tong
我努力挣脱
Wo nu li zheng tuo
试着寻找你的笑容
Shi zhe xun zhao ni de xiao rong
只是来不及
Zhi shi lai bu ji
时间只剩下一个我
Shi jian zhi sheng xia yi ge wo
错就是我和你曾经爱过
Cuo jiu shi wo he ni ceng jing ai guo
Repeat **,* #

pre-chorus
# 尽管眼泪一直流
Jin guan yan lei yi zhi liu
祝福话请你要带走
Zhu fu hua qing ni yao dai zou
答应我从今后你会一直好好的过
Da ying wo cong jin hou ni hui yi zhi hao hao de guo
我会留在你左右 当你感到 失望的时候
Wo hui liu zai ni zuo you   dang ni gan dao  shi wang de shi hou
记得还有我~~
Ji de hai you wo~~

找寻你我 曾经编织的梦
Zhao xun ni wo   ceng jing bian zhi de meng
虽然被你遗忘了很久
Sui ran bei ni yi wang le hen jiu
就算是
Jiu suan shi
紧握的拳头仍在发抖
Jin wo de quan tou reng zai fa dou
我依然守候这片天空 
Wo yi ran shou hou zhe pian tian kong*

严禁抄袭者噢..记得尊重原创者噢..^^

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ENGLISH TRANSLATION

When the moment you leave
Silence is the only choice
Helpless eyes staring at your back
As you turn off and leave
It hurts just as sad as the tears
Gradually, it breaks the gap between us

I try to pretend
As my sadness could ‘not see though a glance
I hold my breath
Immersed myself in the breathless life
But it just too late
He owns you
Where you took over the chance to rewrite your new chapter

**(chorus)
BABY, how could you just leave me alone and be with him
CZ YOU SHOULD BE MY LADY
Please look at me once more, as I’ve been waiting for you (behind you)
Your story begins as the prelude of music rang
Whereas I picked up the pieces that u left (the sadness)
The ring is on your hands
But happiness doesn’t belongs to me

*See you in your WEDDING DRESS
Belong to your WEDDING DRESS
Dressed in your WEDDING DRESS
Oh~~ the most beautiful WEDDING DRESS*

I guess I’m a coward
dare not to hold your hands back
Perhaps I’ve committed unforgivable mistakes
Aloneness stood deeply in every corner of my mind
Keep on replaying the memories between you and me

I yelled out loudly
But the wound in my heart still hurts
I wriggled myself hardly
Trying to seek for your smile
But it just too late
Merciless of time left me behind
Maybe the only mistake I’ve done is to fall in love with you
(repeat **, *  continue #)

Pre-chorus
#Even though the teardrops would not cease
Please bring away all my blessings that I gave to you
And promise me to live an even better life
I will always stay by you side whenever you felt sorrow
Please leave me in your mind~~

Searching for the dreams and hope that we’ve been through
Although has been long forgotten by you
Even though
Clenched fist still shaking from the pain
But still I’ll awaiting for the day that you come back to my side
(Repeat *)

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lastly, special thx to SHERMAINE TAY  for inspiring me to compose in chinese version..

n of cz thx for all her comments n suggestions o.. hearts**  

(i noe u sure gamdong de la.. xDxDxD!!)

PLZ LEAVE UR COMMENTS~~ =]